i thought it was so beautiful i cried when i read it. One of my friends had a fuss with someone and wrote it. so its definatly not my poetry im not that talented. it seemed appropiate since we are trying to make the forums a fun place again. please do not read anything into this. it is not directed towards anyone or b/c of anyone i just wanted to share this with ya'll.
I didn't know it was goodbye.
Harsh words spoken and thrown,
Parting in a heat of anger,
But I didn't know it was goodbye.
I'll never see your face again,
Never again will I hear your voice,
The good times had come to an end.
But I didn't know it was goodbye.
I never would have said those things.
I never would have called you those names,
If it meant one more day as friends.
I didn't know it was good bye.
Too many times I wanted to pick up the phone.
Too many times I wanted to knock on the door.
To be able to have the good times again,
If only it hadn't been goodbye.
I'm sorry,
I didn't know.
I didn't know this was goodbye
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sharp1 write: Well Maayan, your English composition is excellent considering English is not your native language. Your errors are few, and inconsequential. You still convey your thoughts clearly, and you have no spelling errors. So pat yourself on the back! :-))
i speak perfect english but i cant spell worth a flip LOL
Well Maayan, your English composition is excellent considering English is not your native language. Your errors are few, and inconsequential. You still convey your thoughts clearly, and you have no spelling errors. So pat yourself on the back! :-))
I didn't know it was goodbye.
Harsh words spoken and thrown,
Parting in a heat of anger,
But I didn't know it was goodbye.
I'll never see your face again,
Never again will I hear your voice,
The good times had come to an end.
But I didn't know it was goodbye.
I never would have said those things.
I never would have called you those names,
If it meant one more day as friends.
I didn't know it was good bye.
Too many times I wanted to pick up the phone.
Too many times I wanted to knock on the door.
To be able to have the good times again,
If only it hadn't been goodbye.
I'm sorry,
I didn't know.
I didn't know this was goodbye
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