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  • View author's info posted on Jan 27, 2006 at 14:46


    I wrote this poem a while back after a breakup...

    ah... alas the truth unfolds before my eyes.
    Here we stand to say our good byes.
    I remember when our eyes first met,
    We knew the obstacles but did not fret.
    As the days passed, our love grew strong.
    In your eyes, I could do no wrong.
    Now the blind folds are off and reality hits.You toss the towel and call it quits.
    where are those loving days now?
    What happened to your vow?
    Broken promises, that what they all are.
    Here my heart lays with another scar.
    Time heals all wounds that's true.
    Right now, i feel the pain...I'm feeling blue.

    I don't consider myself creative but this poem just flowed....Have not been able to write a poem since then....
    The ordeal showed me a side I didn't know I had....
  • View author's info posted on Jan 23, 2006 at 18:34


    Shaebutter and Beauty,

    Hope this thread doesn't die because of a wannabe artist in angst. Just joined MM and appreciate the sharing.

    A poem must be honest to be effective.
    Emotion whispers or stomps, sometimes brilliantly and sometimes with pathos.

    Please keep writing here. It's appreciated.
  • View author's info posted on Dec 21, 2005 at 05:20


    shaebutter write:
    Ok..I just want to know if you took your meds or just having a bad day...Black women, trying to be white and white women trying to be black..we are all......will not repeat such a blatant disrespect to your ignorance, but will end it by saying God bless you on your endeavors. Both sound mind and insane..


    You are right,please forgive me,,You are a sexy animal,judgeing by the look in your eyes you are blazeing hot,thats why I came here to MM to see women that look like you.A woman glows like a d.a.m Halo when in need of MAN MEAT,your light is blinding,,with that said i'll say goodbye..
  • View author's info posted on Dec 21, 2005 at 00:34


    Ok..I just want to know if you took your meds or just having a bad day...Black women, trying to be white and white women trying to be black..we are all......will not repeat such a blatant disrespect to your ignorance, but will end it by saying God bless you on your endeavors. Both sound mind and insane..
  • View author's info posted on Dec 17, 2005 at 09:05


    WrightWoodPT write:
    I think she thinks you're full of Caca, Holmes



    I will have respect for these poet's and remain silent.Poetry is not poetry
    mix with confusion,good work ladies.It don't matter if i'm a good Poet or not,I love poetry as much as the pro's.
  • View author's info posted on Dec 16, 2005 at 20:26


    I think she thinks you're full of Caca, Holmes
  • View author's info posted on Dec 15, 2005 at 08:59


    shaebutter write:
    Tapo, if i may call you that for short...thank you for the kind words. I have been writing since I was 10. My poems was stolen and recorded with songs by a famous singer. I just recently started back. I love the arts and I am happy that you love poetry too. Keep doing what you are doing and make lots of money doing what you already will do for nothing at all....peace, love and happiness your way...


    Hey friend did'nt you have protection on your creations,Please share the story with us. I have my creations protected,you don't have to spell out name and companies.There are poets out there and songwriter's that can't create anymore because they have partyed hard all thier life and scorched thier brain cells so now they have to steal other people's creations. They know if you have protection on your creations or not,they can check with the Libaray Of Congress for this info.

    Topatoya
    Lumbee
    Lost as the Tribes of Israel
  • View author's info posted on Dec 14, 2005 at 16:04


    Tapo, if i may call you that for short...thank you for the kind words. I have been writing since I was 10. My poems was stolen and recorded with songs by a famous singer. I just recently started back. I love the arts and I am happy that you love poetry too. Keep doing what you are doing and make lots of money doing what you already will do for nothing at all....peace, love and happiness your way...
  • View author's info posted on Dec 14, 2005 at 16:00


    Beauty your words are wonderful, and truly coming from your heart. I hope that you keep expressing yourself through poems, you are a natural and you have a gift...ty
  • View author's info posted on Dec 14, 2005 at 07:14


    beautynbrains4u write:
    Why hide beneath a mask
    presenting only fragments of truth
    of our authentic selves?
    Glimpses revealed to others
    fleetingly, then quickly retreating
    into safety again.
    When flinging the doors wide open
    we breathe new life into our
    otherwise confining space.


    Wow I love your poems friend these are just great I sure love a good poet.Thanks a million for shareing your creations you are very talanted,god bless.

    Topatoya
    Lumbee Indian
    Lost as the Tribes of Israel
    -------------------------------
    If It's Not Different,,It's Not Your's
  • View author's info posted on Dec 13, 2005 at 06:37


    This is a poem I wrote for my mother god rest her soul.She showed my how to respect the spirit of life,even after her death...........

    This is a song soon to be recorded


    ((( Another Cheating Game )))
    by Topatoya,,,all rights reservedxxxxxx


    I heard mama say to daddy
    I can't take this anymore,
    with tears in her eyes
    mama reached for the door,
    and said all those nights
    he was with the boys
    son he was lieing to me.
    ==============

    It's just another cheating game
    son that your daddy plays
    another cheating game
    he plays on me.
    ==============

    daddy got mad
    and punched a hole in the door
    I heard him curesing poor mama
    he called mama a W-hore
    mama grabbed her suitcase
    looked at me and said boy
    are you coming with me,because
    ===============

    It's just another cheating game
    son that your daddy plays
    another cheating game
    he plays on me.
    ===============
    Then mama said son he's still
    cheating on me He thinks i'm
    to stupid and to blind to see
    She said I tryed to be the best
    wife I could be but he would'nt change
    and then mama said to me.
    ===============

    It's just another cheating game
    son that your daddy plays
    another cheating game
    he plays on me.
    ===============

    Mama said son are you coming
    with me,i'm tire of liveing in this
    misery,she said this ain't the
    way true love suppose to be
    he'll never change and then
    mama said to me.
    ===============

    It's just another cheating game
    son that your daddy plays
    another cheating game
    he plays on me.......

    all rights reserved

    Topatoya
    Lumbee
    Lost as the Tribes of Israel
    _________________
    If It's Not Different..It's Not Your's
  • View author's info posted on Dec 13, 2005 at 06:16


    shaebutter write:
    I just won an international poetry contest, and would love to start a chat where everyone can dedicate a poem to someone they love, or lost...please feel free to express yourself. My poem will be published in Eternal Portraits in "2006"
    My love for poetry puts my body in motion.....LOL


    Hello,congradulation friend this is great news.I would love to hear your poem sometime.I notice how people here avoid others by not replying.I wish you the best friend and I hope you become a famous writer and come back here to this forum and tell these stuck up a$$holes about your success goodluck friend and keep writing it keeps the soul in touch with real human being's,,god bless.......


    Heres a poem Im putting music to to create a song.I love poetry this is part of that song....--------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    ((( CRYING ))) By Topatoya all rights reserved

    So many night she spent alone
    She got tired of all my lieing,
    She Packed her suitcase
    and now she's gone now i'm
    the fool here (( CRYING ))

    I did'nt know just what I had
    I broke her heart without even
    trying, Now I spend my nights alone
    Now i'm the fool here (( CRYING )).

    Lastnight I dreamed that we made
    love and flowers I was buying
    Then I woke up from my sleep
    and found myself (( C.R.Y.I.N.G )).

    All rights reserved

    Topatoya
    Lumbee
    Lost as the Tribes of Israel
    __________________
    If It's Not Different,, It's Not Your's
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