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Posted on Fri, Jan 27, 2006 14:46

I wrote this poem a while back after a breakup...

ah... alas the truth unfolds before my eyes.
Here we stand to say our good byes.
I remember when our eyes first met,
We knew the obstacles but did not fret.
As the days passed, our love grew strong.
In your eyes, I could do no wrong.
Now the blind folds are off and reality hits.You toss the towel and call it quits.
where are those loving days now?
What happened to your vow?
Broken promises, that what they all are.
Here my heart lays with another scar.
Time heals all wounds that's true.
Right now, i feel the pain...I'm feeling blue.

I don't consider myself creative but this poem just flowed....Have not been able to write a poem since then....
The ordeal showed me a side I didn't know I had....



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Posted on Mon, Jan 23, 2006 18:34

Shaebutter and Beauty,

Hope this thread doesn't die because of a wannabe artist in angst. Just joined MM and appreciate the sharing.

A poem must be honest to be effective.
Emotion whispers or stomps, sometimes brilliantly and sometimes with pathos.

Please keep writing here. It's appreciated.



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Posted on Wed, Dec 21, 2005 05:20

shaebutter write:
Ok..I just want to know if you took your meds or just having a bad day...Black women, trying to be white and white women trying to be black..we are all......will not repeat such a blatant disrespect to your ignorance, but will end it by saying God bless you on your endeavors. Both sound mind and insane..


You are right,please forgive me,,You are a sexy animal,judgeing by the look in your eyes you are blazeing hot,thats why I came here to MM to see women that look like you.A woman glows like a d.a.m Halo when in need of MAN MEAT,your light is blinding,,with that said i'll say goodbye..



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Posted on Wed, Dec 21, 2005 00:34

Ok..I just want to know if you took your meds or just having a bad day...Black women, trying to be white and white women trying to be black..we are all......will not repeat such a blatant disrespect to your ignorance, but will end it by saying God bless you on your endeavors. Both sound mind and insane..

  


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Posted on Sat, Dec 17, 2005 09:05

WrightWoodPT write:
I think she thinks you're full of Caca, Holmes



I will have respect for these poet's and remain silent.Poetry is not poetry
mix with confusion,good work ladies.It don't matter if i'm a good Poet or not,I love poetry as much as the pro's.



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Posted on Fri, Dec 16, 2005 20:26

I think she thinks you're full of Caca, Holmes



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Posted on Thu, Dec 15, 2005 08:59

shaebutter write:
Tapo, if i may call you that for short...thank you for the kind words. I have been writing since I was 10. My poems was stolen and recorded with songs by a famous singer. I just recently started back. I love the arts and I am happy that you love poetry too. Keep doing what you are doing and make lots of money doing what you already will do for nothing at all....peace, love and happiness your way...


Hey friend did'nt you have protection on your creations,Please share the story with us. I have my creations protected,you don't have to spell out name and companies.There are poets out there and songwriter's that can't create anymore because they have partyed hard all thier life and scorched thier brain cells so now they have to steal other people's creations. They know if you have protection on your creations or not,they can check with the Libaray Of Congress for this info.

Topatoya
Lumbee
Lost as the Tribes of Israel



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Posted on Wed, Dec 14, 2005 16:04

Tapo, if i may call you that for short...thank you for the kind words. I have been writing since I was 10. My poems was stolen and recorded with songs by a famous singer. I just recently started back. I love the arts and I am happy that you love poetry too. Keep doing what you are doing and make lots of money doing what you already will do for nothing at all....peace, love and happiness your way...

  


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Posted on Wed, Dec 14, 2005 16:00

Beauty your words are wonderful, and truly coming from your heart. I hope that you keep expressing yourself through poems, you are a natural and you have a gift...ty

  


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Posted on Wed, Dec 14, 2005 07:14

beautynbrains4u write:
Why hide beneath a mask
presenting only fragments of truth
of our authentic selves?
Glimpses revealed to others
fleetingly, then quickly retreating
into safety again.
When flinging the doors wide open
we breathe new life into our
otherwise confining space.


Wow I love your poems friend these are just great I sure love a good poet.Thanks a million for shareing your creations you are very talanted,god bless.

Topatoya
Lumbee Indian
Lost as the Tribes of Israel
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If It's Not Different,,It's Not Your's



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Posted on Tue, Dec 13, 2005 06:37

This is a poem I wrote for my mother god rest her soul.She showed my how to respect the spirit of life,even after her death...........

This is a song soon to be recorded


((( Another Cheating Game )))
by Topatoya,,,all rights reservedxxxxxx


I heard mama say to daddy
I can't take this anymore,
with tears in her eyes
mama reached for the door,
and said all those nights
he was with the boys
son he was lieing to me.
==============

It's just another cheating game
son that your daddy plays
another cheating game
he plays on me.
==============

daddy got mad
and punched a hole in the door
I heard him curesing poor mama
he called mama a W-hore
mama grabbed her suitcase
looked at me and said boy
are you coming with me,because
===============

It's just another cheating game
son that your daddy plays
another cheating game
he plays on me.
===============
Then mama said son he's still
cheating on me He thinks i'm
to stupid and to blind to see
She said I tryed to be the best
wife I could be but he would'nt change
and then mama said to me.
===============

It's just another cheating game
son that your daddy plays
another cheating game
he plays on me.
===============

Mama said son are you coming
with me,i'm tire of liveing in this
misery,she said this ain't the
way true love suppose to be
he'll never change and then
mama said to me.
===============

It's just another cheating game
son that your daddy plays
another cheating game
he plays on me.......

all rights reserved

Topatoya
Lumbee
Lost as the Tribes of Israel
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If It's Not Different..It's Not Your's



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Posted on Tue, Dec 13, 2005 06:16

shaebutter write:
I just won an international poetry contest, and would love to start a chat where everyone can dedicate a poem to someone they love, or lost...please feel free to express yourself. My poem will be published in Eternal Portraits in "2006"
My love for poetry puts my body in motion.....LOL


Hello,congradulation friend this is great news.I would love to hear your poem sometime.I notice how people here avoid others by not replying.I wish you the best friend and I hope you become a famous writer and come back here to this forum and tell these stuck up a$$holes about your success goodluck friend and keep writing it keeps the soul in touch with real human being's,,god bless.......


Heres a poem Im putting music to to create a song.I love poetry this is part of that song....--------------------------------------------------------------------------------

((( CRYING ))) By Topatoya all rights reserved

So many night she spent alone
She got tired of all my lieing,
She Packed her suitcase
and now she's gone now i'm
the fool here (( CRYING ))

I did'nt know just what I had
I broke her heart without even
trying, Now I spend my nights alone
Now i'm the fool here (( CRYING )).

Lastnight I dreamed that we made
love and flowers I was buying
Then I woke up from my sleep
and found myself (( C.R.Y.I.N.G )).

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Topatoya
Lumbee
Lost as the Tribes of Israel
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If It's Not Different,, It's Not Your's



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