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Posted on Fri, Mar 05, 2010 01:30 PM

sometimes it just hurts...

coldmoon

white lifeless moon hanging in winter sky
reflecting suns heat, now cold in my eye.
a long dead star's light shining on me
twinkling to fool me that its life i see

lone coyote  howls to the uncaring moon
voice unanswered in the cold night gloom
night soo long it seems there is no day
the earth hasn't moved because you didn't

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Posted on Sun, Mar 14, 2010 08:27 PM

Your poetry and writings are just beautiful. I cannot imagine that you would have any difficulty at all finding the right one. It would be an honor and a pleasure to be the one that is privileged enough to see your creations first hand. I know that I appear to be very far away, but New York is my home and I never would consider travelling to meet the right one a problem at all. This is such a global world these days; who knows where that special person might be? I would love to communicate with you if you are interested. Send me an email and I will respond. I would love to read your Christmas stories and all about life on the farm.

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Posted on Mon, Mar 08, 2010 11:41 PM

very nice...v

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Posted on Mon, Mar 08, 2010 10:20 PM

thank you    spring is around the corner


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Posted on Sun, Mar 07, 2010 01:59 PM

i get very depressed and lonely in winter cant wait for spring to change it around... beautiful writing

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Posted on Sun, Mar 07, 2010 07:22 AM

Maybe you should move?

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Posted on Sat, Mar 06, 2010 06:31 PM

Quoting smax117

sometimes it just hurts...

coldmoon

white lifeless moon hanging in winter sky
reflecting suns heat, now cold in my eye.
a long dead star's light shining on me
twinkling to fool me that its life i see

lone coyote  howls to the uncaring moon
voice unanswered in the cold night gloom
night soo long it seems there is no day
the earth hasn't moved because you didn't

      ​        ​        ​        ​        ​        ​        ​       stay

 



In  Texas as well as Mexico we can be alone in the wild. It hits you Hard,m furious, forever. Embrace the feeling. It will only come around everyonce and a while!!



Life is a box of chocolates... and, most poor fools are starving to death!!
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Posted on Sat, Mar 06, 2010 06:14 AM

...I like it..Its ..sensibility....

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Posted on Sat, Mar 06, 2010 01:58 AM

yes   we all have our moments


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Posted on Sat, Mar 06, 2010 12:29 AM

Did you write this? Beautiful and also very sad.


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