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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 20:16

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OK. In all seriousness...yes, I can do this.  And my initial intent for this blog begs me to take an actual stab at this.  Please help.

 

 

 

"The task we are undertaking is to set a new standard for the fuel burning automobile engine.  With gas costing much less than it did a year ago and hybrid sales sluggish, an efficient gasoline engine is the only solution to the transportation needs of our future economy.  The engine we've designed and internationally patented is that solution.  It is efficient AND affordable, environmentally responsible and, intellectually, sexy as H**L.  Improving an outdated concept will never be as effective as re-thinking it.  Kiss kiss, here's my number."

 

 

 

The idea isn't to describe the project.  It's to make you beg for more.  So my question is, does this paragraph accomplish that?



A mean green sexy machine....LOL!



"The best way to predict the future....Is to create it."

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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 19:34

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Bedroom eyes, pursed kissy lips? Julie! I must be taught! My elevator is taking off, and I'm thinking I'll be riding solo! 



Oh sweetie, you are a doll....you won't have any problem with that...you have what it takes...



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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 17:05

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OK. In all seriousness...yes, I can do this.  And my initial intent for this blog begs me to take an actual stab at this.  Please help.

 

 

 

"The task we are undertaking is to set a new standard for the fuel burning automobile engine.  With gas costing much less than it did a year ago and hybrid sales sluggish, an efficient gasoline engine is the only solution to the transportation needs of our future economy.  The engine we've designed and internationally patented is that solution.  It is efficient AND affordable, environmentally responsible and, intellectually, sexy as H**L.  Improving an outdated concept will never be as effective as re-thinking it.  Kiss kiss, here's my number."

 

 

 

The idea isn't to describe the project.  It's to make you beg for more.  So my question is, does this paragraph accomplish that?



I like it Eva.....I'm not sure about the sexy as H**L comment. You going to fly that by potential investors? Some of them might be old fashioned and wouldn't care if an engine was sexy. lol They just want it to be good and marketable and make them a lot of money. I really like the 'efficient and affordable, environmentally responsible' part...and I LOVE 'improving an outdated concept will never be as effective as re-thinking it'....on the other hand.....calling it sexy is an attention getter. Might pique their initial interest.

Lordy, I'm so wishy washy....lol  I'm no help at all....:-)

Theo



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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 16:29

OK. In all seriousness...yes, I can do this.  And my initial intent for this blog begs me to take an actual stab at this.  Please help.

 

 

 

"The task we are undertaking is to set a new standard for the fuel burning automobile engine.  With gas costing much less than it did a year ago and hybrid sales sluggish, an efficient gasoline engine is the only solution to the transportation needs of our future economy.  The engine we've designed and internationally patented is that solution.  It is efficient AND affordable, environmentally responsible and, intellectually, sexy as H**L.  Improving an outdated concept will never be as effective as re-thinking it.  Kiss kiss, here's my number."

 

 

 

The idea isn't to describe the project.  It's to make you beg for more.  So my question is, does this paragraph accomplish that?



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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 16:08

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LOL....I totally agree....I'll have another, please and so will he!

Cheers!

Theo



ROFLMAO.  You saw my lips and eyes concept.  Apparently, he's going to need a twelve-pack!



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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 16:06

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hmm, big eyes, red plump lips? no no dear...



Bedroom eyes, pursed kissy lips? Julie! I must be taught! My elevator is taking off, and I'm thinking I'll be riding solo! 



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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 15:59

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TOTALLY! I still can't figure out why it doesn't work for me!



hmm, big eyes, red plump lips? no no dear...



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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 15:49

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Theo and GW,

Lame is like beauty; it's in the eyes of the beerholder.

 



LOL....I totally agree....I'll have another, please and so will he!

Cheers!

Theo



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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 15:19

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Right, huh? I'll be brave and admit it...you do get more beautiful the more beer I drink.  Would that confession make you answer the phone?



It would make me buy you more beer!!



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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 15:04

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Yep boobies sounds good what about a little lip plumping too??/ Why dont we start an MM plastic surgery clinic??? Newman can take the bookings Ray and Conyers on aftercare, Bill on wardrobe all we need now is someone who can wield a knife....lolol any suggestions?


Tink, I have had a change of heart.  Last night, I met a man with 3 boobies. Yes, absolutely true.  I promise I will never look at fakies the same.  Not that I was a real "looker". Just to clarify.  

LOL!!  Yes, we need a knife wielder. And we need a sterile environment.  I think some lip plumping, and the requisite laughing gas could still work for me.  

I'm going to go with an LA knife guy.  I'll scout around the other side of MM and see if I can't score us one.



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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 14:59

Quoting thenewman

Theo and GW,

Lame is like beauty; it's in the eyes of the beerholder.

 



Right, huh? I'll be brave and admit it...you do get more beautiful the more beer I drink.  Would that confession make you answer the phone?



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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 14:55

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Have you even tried seducing the man just by your lips and eyes but no contact?

Well it worked for me like a charm..always-:)

Julie



TOTALLY! I still can't figure out why it doesn't work for me!


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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 14:09

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I like the hon thing..Tell me more....And this polar bear prefers a warm beach....but will still dive into the cold Bay next year. 

Current mood: Intrigued and a polar bear thinking sushi and wine are good..3 glasses done....OMG not 3??    It's the weekend!

 
 

Hon, as in honey sugar baby sweet doll-face thing, you :) Don't take it personal...I'm from California.
 
What Bay? And by the Way.  How about that Elevator Pitch? I still have a deadline.  And I'm "grounded" until further notice.

 

OK...This keeps getting rejected...Chesapeake Bay.  Home of the MD crab!!  vs. Your San Francisco Bay, home of the fag....lol...ooops JK....

 
BTW Tink and I are opening up a MM Gay bar and grill.  Will be writing the blog soon.  And I need to get my marketing together.  So like you I have started my 30 second elevator pitch.  This is what I have so far.  Hens Day Wednesday--Sr Citizen Lesbian night at the grill.  Friday is going to be Bi Friday (name of bar being developed).  Anyway more to come.
 
 

 



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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 14:08

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Ever see the movie "Working Girl"?  Everyone's selling something.  Goods, services, wit, charm, date-worthiness, whatever. And, with a typical attention span of about 30 seconds, how do you plan to best use the precious time of your potential buyer?

 

Do you have an Elevator Pitch? Have you considered the importance? If you had one, would you share it?

 

Eva

 

PS, I especially invite comments because I'm working on one for a new product, due Monday!



Have you even tried seducing the man just by your lips and eyes but no contact?

Well it worked for me like a charm..always-:)

Julie



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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 13:58

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And, alas, lass, this is the perfect hijack post.  It's diabolical, really.  We can use it to trick G into actually answering the topic!

 

Newman, what IS "the lamest thing a woman could say to you that would make the polar bear answer the phone"? And does it fit inside of 30 seconds??



Theo and GW,

Lame is like beauty; it's in the eyes of the beerholder.

 


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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 04:37

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Hijack award pending CG's permission, lol.  Ok, Me, I think maybe I'd go for boobies. 



Yep boobies sounds good what about a little lip plumping too??/ Why dont we start an MM plastic surgery clinic??? Newman can take the bookings Ray and Conyers on aftercare, Bill on wardrobe all we need now is someone who can wield a knife....lolol any suggestions?



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Posted on Sun, Feb 28, 2010 04:33

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You can always change it up, depending on how green his shirt is :)



lololol That green shirt is going to get him into trouble I think.... You go get him girl!!! and report back LMAO



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Posted on Sat, Feb 27, 2010 15:11

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lol gently now all i have to do is get that bod  and pout my lips.....ok im up for it lets talk implants and lip plumping  If you could have anything done what would it be?????

I would go for the longer legs option what about you guys??? she says doing a little hijacking!



lol Tink...could we add a teensy waist to that? That would have my vote!



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Posted on Sat, Feb 27, 2010 15:08

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And, alas, lass, this is the perfect hijack post.  It's diabolical, really.  We can use it to trick G into actually answering the topic!

 

Newman, what IS "the lamest thing a woman could say to you that would make the polar bear answer the phone"? And does it fit inside of 30 seconds??



Tricking into confession....that was my intent...lol



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Posted on Sat, Feb 27, 2010 13:24

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Eva...slight hi-jack here, but since we've talked about this, I think it's ok...lol

newman.....you have me intrigued. So if the polar bear doesn't make phone calls and the ladies call you instead...then what is the lamest thing a woman could say to you that would make the polar bear answer the phone? 3 glasses of wine and sushi too?  Love sushi!  That's a perfect combo. Man, I went to bed too early last night.

Theo



And, alas, lass, this is the perfect hijack post.  It's diabolical, really.  We can use it to trick G into actually answering the topic!

 

Newman, what IS "the lamest thing a woman could say to you that would make the polar bear answer the phone"? And does it fit inside of 30 seconds??



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